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Song For The Commander

Dear Ruthie,

I originally wrote this for another beautiful artistic man – Mr. Cohen…but thought today would be a good day to dedicate this to Tony. Thank you to BOTH of you.

I'm like a giraffe on a leash
A polar bear on a beach
A dog on a phone
A cat with a silvertone

I'm a line with no hook
Pages without a book
I'm the winning own goal
I'm a bridge without a toll.

But there's one thing that I know
Is this the way it goes?
And it goes
And it goes
On it goes....

I'm a stripper with no pole
An elephant in a hole
I'm nails down a chalkboard
I'm the blunt edge of a short sword.

I'm a wasp on a honey pot
A traffic light with no stop
A hangman with a phone cord
A servant with no Lord

But there's one thing that I know
Is this the way it goes?
And it goes
And it goes
On it goes...

I'm get outta jail for free
But there's no one playing but me
I'm twisted and confused
I'm washed up and used

I'm a lady killer with no cop
Mutton with no chops
I'm the last train to Belson
I'm an unraveled half nelson

But there's one thing that I know
Is this the way it goes?
And it goes
And it goes
On it goes....

I'm that record that always sticks
Forever fiending always sick
I'm the up to your down
The smile to your frown.

So lay me out in the sun
Stick a fork in me I am done
The Commander has fallen
Better pour me a tall one...

And there's one thing that I know
Closing time it comes and it goes
And it goes
And it goes
On it goes..
On it goes
And it goes....

6 Comments

  1. Time Traveler of Life

    I LOVE this! I like to use idioms, puns, and anything that makes my stories for real people. I don’t write for the highly educated folks, but for the down to earth. and I like to make jokes. I laughed and smiled a lot reading your poem.

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